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m (Snyder1986 moved page Talk:Battle of Agidda to Talk:1st Battle of Agidda: The 2nd Battle of Agidda occurred during the Solomani Rim War)
 
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I was trying to fill in a missing page, listed on the wanted list.  I have never seen canon source material that discusses this battle in particular.  So I wrote this as a place holder to which more learned scholars could add more detail.  My entry was intended to be generic (marked non canon) enough not to step on toes.  Would you prefer I create the "details" of the battle?  We are talking about the very early moves toward imperial consolidation versus the small kingdoms post long night.  Cleon and friends were primitive at this point, right?
 
I was trying to fill in a missing page, listed on the wanted list.  I have never seen canon source material that discusses this battle in particular.  So I wrote this as a place holder to which more learned scholars could add more detail.  My entry was intended to be generic (marked non canon) enough not to step on toes.  Would you prefer I create the "details" of the battle?  We are talking about the very early moves toward imperial consolidation versus the small kingdoms post long night.  Cleon and friends were primitive at this point, right?
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I have tried to effect a correction of sorts by moving the bramble and borrowing some text from the Agidda entry.
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: This is now much better. The article now mainly talks about the Battle of Agidda, even as short as it is. The Bramble Class article now mainly talks about the fine design you have created. Thank you for the changes [[User:Tjoneslo|Tjoneslo]] ([[User talk:Tjoneslo|talk]]) 18:37, 4 September 2014 (EDT)

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It seems to me the title would be more appropriate as "Bramble Class Gunboat". There is very little information on the Battle of Agidda. 22:01, 3 September 2014 (EDT)

I agree, I would move all of or the bulk of the article to "Bramble Class". And leave this article for details of the battle. Tjoneslo (talk) 10:42, 4 September 2014 (EDT)

I was trying to fill in a missing page, listed on the wanted list. I have never seen canon source material that discusses this battle in particular. So I wrote this as a place holder to which more learned scholars could add more detail. My entry was intended to be generic (marked non canon) enough not to step on toes. Would you prefer I create the "details" of the battle? We are talking about the very early moves toward imperial consolidation versus the small kingdoms post long night. Cleon and friends were primitive at this point, right?

I have tried to effect a correction of sorts by moving the bramble and borrowing some text from the Agidda entry.

This is now much better. The article now mainly talks about the Battle of Agidda, even as short as it is. The Bramble Class article now mainly talks about the fine design you have created. Thank you for the changes Tjoneslo (talk) 18:37, 4 September 2014 (EDT)
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