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: - [[User:Maksim-Smelchak|Maksim-Smelchak]] ([[User talk:Maksim-Smelchak|talk]]) 10:04, 28 April 2018 (EDT) | : - [[User:Maksim-Smelchak|Maksim-Smelchak]] ([[User talk:Maksim-Smelchak|talk]]) 10:04, 28 April 2018 (EDT) | ||
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:: It looks great. You seem to have gotten all the subtle differences between the different versions of Traveller. | :: It looks great. You seem to have gotten all the subtle differences between the different versions of Traveller. | ||
:: I would make two changes, and you should take this as ideas for improvement. | :: I would make two changes, and you should take this as ideas for improvement. | ||
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:: Atmospheres have two broad definition points: Atmospheric pressure and composition. The article alludes to this at several points. I would make explicit at the top of the article with a table of pressure vs composition, which contains the values of the Traveller atmosphere types (names & codes). [[World Builder's Handbook]], [[First In]], and Exotic Atmospheres all make this explicit. This would make the whole article flow better. | :: Atmospheres have two broad definition points: Atmospheric pressure and composition. The article alludes to this at several points. I would make explicit at the top of the article with a table of pressure vs composition, which contains the values of the Traveller atmosphere types (names & codes). [[World Builder's Handbook]], [[First In]], and Exotic Atmospheres all make this explicit. This would make the whole article flow better. | ||
: - [[User:Tjoneslo|Tjoneslo]] ([[User talk:Tjoneslo|talk]]) 14:41, 28 April 2018 (EDT) | : - [[User:Tjoneslo|Tjoneslo]] ([[User talk:Tjoneslo|talk]]) 14:41, 28 April 2018 (EDT) | ||
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== Humanocentrism (2018) == | == Humanocentrism (2018) == |