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: - [[User:Maksim-Smelchak|Maksim-Smelchak]] ([[User talk:Maksim-Smelchak|talk]]) 10:04, 28 April 2018 (EDT)
 
: - [[User:Maksim-Smelchak|Maksim-Smelchak]] ([[User talk:Maksim-Smelchak|talk]]) 10:04, 28 April 2018 (EDT)
  
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:: It looks great. You seem to have gotten all the subtle differences between the different versions of Traveller.   
 
:: It looks great. You seem to have gotten all the subtle differences between the different versions of Traveller.   
 
:: I would make two changes, and you should take this as ideas for improvement.  
 
:: I would make two changes, and you should take this as ideas for improvement.  
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:: Atmospheres have two broad definition points: Atmospheric pressure and composition. The article alludes to this at several points. I would make explicit at the top of the article with a table of pressure vs composition, which contains the values of the Traveller atmosphere types (names & codes). [[World Builder's Handbook]], [[First In]], and Exotic Atmospheres all make this explicit. This would make the whole article flow better.  
 
:: Atmospheres have two broad definition points: Atmospheric pressure and composition. The article alludes to this at several points. I would make explicit at the top of the article with a table of pressure vs composition, which contains the values of the Traveller atmosphere types (names & codes). [[World Builder's Handbook]], [[First In]], and Exotic Atmospheres all make this explicit. This would make the whole article flow better.  
 
: - [[User:Tjoneslo|Tjoneslo]] ([[User talk:Tjoneslo|talk]]) 14:41, 28 April 2018 (EDT)
 
: - [[User:Tjoneslo|Tjoneslo]] ([[User talk:Tjoneslo|talk]]) 14:41, 28 April 2018 (EDT)
 
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I like your idea. Go for it, not that you need my permission. I am trying to be encouraging and supportive. I value your contributions and ideas.
 
: Please let me know how I can be supportive.
 
: I am still working on coordinating the materials from [[World Builder's Handbook]], [[First In]], and others.
 
: You may have noticed that I have been mapping out various ideas in publications one by one. It makes it easier to track and cite them.
 
: I have a whole pile full of notes on Taints that I cam compiling and aggregating at the moment.
 
: You are an important part of the team and I love it when you add your valuable viewpoint and ideas to our articles.
 
: I am very good with you challenging anything that I do because I think it helps me to improve, which in turn helps us to improve the wiki. Thank you.
 
: - [[User:Maksim-Smelchak|Maksim-Smelchak]] ([[User talk:Maksim-Smelchak|talk]]) 21:49, 28 April 2018 (EDT)
 
  
 
== Humanocentrism (2018) ==
 
== Humanocentrism (2018) ==

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