Talk:Khaolr (world)
In the History and Background (Dossier) section, I propose these changes (or similar):
Khaolr is relatively busy, with a growing economy and improving standards of living. It is the site of an Aslan colony (FOLLOWING THE ARRIVAL IN c1060 OF ASLAN IHATEI SCOUTS AND PIONEERS). [BUT SOURCE CITATION NEEDED]
...and...
They are large, scaly, finger-faced ocean floor dwellers with a sophisticated social structure and ancient traditions and rights. [REPLACE THIS LINE WITH BELOW EXTRACTED FROM ILUK'II PAGE] [SHOULD IT CITE THAT IN ANY WAY?] [They are large ocean-dwelling pack chasers with bio-electrical sensitivity, a sophisticated society, and an ancient culture rich in traditions and rights.]
AlexT (talk) 13:07, 25 May 2023 (EDT)
The reference to Aslan settling around 1060 is believed to be from a currently unavailable source, a work by Peter Gray. Even though unable to directly cite that source, I would like to add a citation acknowledging its existence as a source. 193.35.146.56 14:16, 25 May 2023 (EDT)
Peter Grey cite[edit]
Where was the original published cite by Peter? I have access to a number of older sources that are no longer available. If you can give me a hint as to where to start looking it would be a great help. Thanks. Tjoneslo (talk) 18:31, 25 May 2023 (EDT)